Ivan, Age 12, Melbourne, Australia
Today I swan at the pool.
It's so cold and cool,
My father jumped into the water
I pushed my mother and he caught her.
My mother was very cold
Out of the water she rolled.
I quickly followed my mother
And to the warm water was the other
It's was so warming and good.
A big warm bed it could.
I tried to sleep in this warm bed.
But it wasn't too comfy for my head,
"Let's go home!" my dad said.
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