It was a beautiful bursting day in August, around 9
a.m., and the sky was as blue as a blue jay. We were packing up to leave
to Los Angeles. We were in the car when all of the sudden, we noticed
there was a road block as big as a boulder. Although there was space for
cars to pass, they wouldn’t let you pass.
So we went to the other road. When we were on the freeway, there was a
car crash. It took hours because the traffic was as slow as a slimy
When we were in Los Angeles, it was hard to find a hotel because the
weather was as hot and we didn’t have a reservation. Finally we found a
hotel close to Disneyland.
When we got inside the hotel it had two small beds the size of dwarves'
beds, but it had a beautiful view to Disneyland. It had a TV with seven
channels. The next day we got up and went to IHOP. I was so hungry that
I could hear my stomach growling like an angry grizzly bear.
When we were in Disneyland I got on the big Ferris wheel when all of the
sudden I could see my baby brother from the Ferris wheel. I shouted
‘’Don’t move’ ’.Although I knew that he couldn’t hear me, I still
shouted. When I got of the ride, I didn’t see my baby brother. I asked
the security guard ‘’Have you seen him’’, and I showed him a picture of
my brother on my phone.
He answered with a deep voice. ‘‘I noticed him walking into the ride ’Autotopia’.”
Then I said, “So he is driving a car?” “Yep,” said the security guard .
“Are you crazy?” I yelled.
We went to ‘Autotopia’ and noticed my brother driving. When my family
and I got on, he got off. He was on ’The Elevator of Doom.' When he
jumped off ‘The Elevator of Doom’ I thought he would go splat like a fly
on a fly swatter . I thought that I would faint. He was lucky because he
fell on a pillow. “What a coincidence that pillow was there,” I thought.
He fell on a pillow, and bounced to the next ride. He was about to fall,
but he got on the next ride. It was the big ride called ‘The Vomit
Ride.' He vomited on everyone. They said, ‘’Clean up on aisle
When I was about to get him, he saw a penny. He said ‘’OOOH! Shiny!”
That slowed him down enough for me to get him.
‘’Finally,‘’ I thought. So we went back to the hotel.